Obituary…


Flowers and wreaths
Covered in white
Painted light through the walls
Of life, shining through
Waking past, the grieving
Wake of a gathering
That waited, wanted, prayed
And now gutted
In a show
Of emotional departure
Far moved away
From self conscious composed
Selves in a cloud of smoke-filled
Delusional incandescence
Sudden holiness
Warmth in the cold
Hands of my obituary

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4 Responses to Obituary…

  1. slpmartin says:

    Such a array of images….they create a very effective scene with concise words…well done.

  2. Jingle says:

    lovely job.
    love the sound of your words, they dance and form a powerful image.

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